Great animation
Yeah, it was very good for a portal submission, which is why I gave all 10's in the categories. The animation is very good- I know I can't do any of that stuff. Consequently, the style's great too. The only problems I had were the characters, the plot, and the dialogue. All seemed somewhat cliche, unoriginal, unrealistic (even in the context of a fantasy setting) unimaginative, and don't seem quite thought out, especially the plot, but then again, there isn't all that much here that isn't like that. Not that I could do much better without substantial effort, but still. No offense though- the quality of the animation and the strength and consistancy of style really do make up for it.